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Thanks, Ersby, glad you like. Yes, the 28th was a VERY bad day for me. I have such days, where everything in life feels like it's hitting me at once. But, at least some good stuff came out of it.
"I Wonder and Wander" was written on the date I'm showing, the 9th, Tuesday, I believe it was. I was on the boards very briefly and typed that one on the spot. The first sentence had been in my head for a while, I finally turned it into something.
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Branflakes, the ninja lesbian milk getter.
The one called "brain".
I wonder where I should wander.
God never gives us more than we can handle.
"See that star...the one shining brighter than all the others? I know the girl who hung it there."
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*slaps forehead*
oh, yeah. It's month/day/year with you guys, not day/month/year. Doh.
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Milk getter: your poems are ok... I can't really get into some of them but I really like that "dream dream dream of her her her" one.
Other i feel as if they're rhymed for the sake of being rhymed. But that just me as the others seem to like it.
Oh world of different taste...
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There's loneliness in the radios...
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Thanks for the honesty dwim. That dream one was very spur of the moment, right before I went off to bed that night.
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Branflakes, the ninja lesbian milk getter.
The one called "brain".
I wonder where I should wander.
God never gives us more than we can handle.
"See that star...the one shining brighter than all the others? I know the girl who hung it there."
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Thank god for the spur of the moment!
That dream one sounds like a song you know...
I can sing it you can sing it
something like a tori song...
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There's loneliness in the radios...
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Not Much Of A Friend
I wish you could trust me.
I wish I could understand why you don?t trust me.
Am I so self-centered
That beyond my two eyes
I can never see what lies
Within your heart?
I know I?d give you the world
But the world isn?t what you want.
I?m too blind to see beyond your surface.
I?m too scared to look below mine.
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Rough draft....
No Help Wanted
06/25/00
I know your heart and intent
Was placed in care and thought.
It?s the words, again, that infuriate
Me to no end. I?m not the type you so
Strongly feel will just step out there
And give the world a whirl.
Leave me to my place and private space.
Stop shoving me where I will not go.
I?ve let you take your path to love
And only hope you?ll let me walk mine.
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I like this. It assert individuality in relationships and we all need our own mind when it comes to relations matters. Good job there bran...
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There's loneliness in the radios...
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Thanks, dwim. Kinda the reason I was so pissed off Saturday night. I felt better after I posted it.
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Branflakes, the ninja lesbian milk getter.
The one called "brain".
I stare at the grace of this magnificent place.
"Please, kiss me before I die."
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They're both good Bran *hug*
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- "How do you know the chosen ones? No greater love hath a man than he lay down his life for his friend. Not for millions, not for glory, not for fame... for one person. In the dark. Where no one will ever know or see." - Sebastion, Babylon 5
- Really I am a woman...honest!
- Oh, and I really like women too ;)
- Resident KiSA (Knight in Shining Armor!)
